Thursday 24th September 2009

PLI: I am learning how to use paragraphs.

LI: We are learning how to write a narrative story.

Down beneath the deep blue ocean, lived a glamorous mermaid who had long hair like Repunsel.

The ocean was a nice blue colour. When she swam the blue colour reminded her about her favourite place called the Diamond Ocean.

The diamond Ocean was a nice place because she met a person and they became friends because when she went to the diamond ocean she was looking for the King but she bumped into her and they were talking and they said can we be best friends and they both said yes and that's how they became friends.