The Scary Castle

Wednesday 23rd September 2009


Learning Intention: We are learning how to write a narrative story.
Personal Learning Intention: I am learning how to write in paragraphs.


The castle steps were cold and I hear someone tip toeing around the big huge castle I see my Dad stealing my homework bo
ok to see if everything is right then I hear lots of creaking sounds from my helper going on to the steps and then I suddenly smelt something that is cooking in the kitchen.

I went there it was my helpers cooking some cookies for the breakfast. I felt scared because it was night time and there could have been ghosts flying around to get me, my friends, my family and my helper. Actually I thought it might just get me because all of my family, helpers and friends were sleeping - I'm the only one awake!!!!